Help! My Daughter’s College Essay Stinks: Here's the Solution

Happy school year!

With college admissions season officially here, I understand that many parents begin to panic. The process can be a daunting time for both parents and students alike. At this juncture, it’s crucial to address a common concern: your child's college essay.

Chances are, you've read your child's essay, and you don't like it. You might even think it stinks or doesn't truly represent who your child is. I'm here to tell you that you're not alone. Many parents and students grapple with this challenge. However, the key is not to rewrite your child's essay for them; it's their journey, after all. Instead, let's work together to ensure your child's essay reflects them authentically.

Why Your Child's Essay Matters 

Your child's college essay is a vital part of their application. It's a chance for them to stand out in a crowded field of applicants, to share their unique experiences, values, and aspirations. This essay is more than just a piece of writing; it's an opportunity for your child to make a lasting impression on college admissions officers.

But how do you help your child craft an outstanding essay without taking over the process? That's where our solution comes into play.

Introducing "How to Write an Awesome College Essay" 

We understand the complexities of the college application process and the importance of a well-written essay. That's why we've created a course specifically designed to help your child succeed: "How to Write an Awesome College Essay."

Our course consists of four comprehensive modules that guide your child through the essay-writing process. We don't believe in replacing your child's voice with artificial intelligence, but we do believe in providing expert guidance to help them produce an exceptional essay.

How It Works

Here's how our course works:

  1. Enroll your child in "How to Write an Awesome College Essay" at
  2. Your child will complete all four modules, gaining valuable insights into crafting a compelling essay.
  3. Once they've produced a draft of their personal essay, they can submit it to us.
  4. Our experienced team will provide personalized feedback via video, ensuring your child receives expert guidance.
  5. Your child will also receive a checklist for success, helping them refine their essay further.

Why Choose Us 

At Strategic Admission Advice, we have a passion for helping students succeed in their college journeys. With our course, your child won't just get essay-writing guidance; they'll gain confidence in representing themselves authentically in their applications.

We understand that school counselors may be overwhelmed with numerous students, making it challenging to provide individualized support. Our course bridges that gap, ensuring your child receives the attention and feedback they need to shine in their college applications.

Parents, if you're concerned that your child's college essay isn't up to par, remember you're not alone. We're here to help you and your child navigate this crucial step in the college admissions process. Don't wait until the last minute to discover your child's essay isn't what it should be.

Invest in your child's future today by purchasing "How to Write an Awesome College Essay." Let us guide your child through the essay-writing process, helping them create an essay that authentically represents their experiences, values, and aspirations. Together, we can ensure your child's college essay is a compelling reflection of who they are.

Thank you for considering Strategic Admission Advice as your partner in this exciting journey. Visit us at, and let's get started on crafting an outstanding college essay that will make your child proud.